I see you and you see me,
Strangers alone on a one way street,
Smiling quietly, heading away,
Baby, I like the way you sway.
Turn around sunshine,
I'd like to tell you a story of mine,
Quietly standing in the sun,
Of tears fought and battles won.
Yes it has, it's been a while,
Since I made a stranger smile.
Quirky conversation beside a cafe window,
Your hair moves in wisps as the wind blows.
You smell of peaches and cream,
Smell so good darlin' I could scream.
Could I fall in love, in love over just a few lines?
I'm a lost kid, please, baby, please be mine.
So this is a kid, writin' you a song,
He'd like you to sing along.
And hold his hand like a good baby girl,
Dance with him and give his hair a nice good twirl.
I see you and you see me,
Strangers alone on a one way street.
Smiling quietly, heading away,
Nothing happened, cuz, there was nothing I could say.
N.B: Listening to Muddy Waters while writing a poem can lead to "happy" bluesy poems. It's that blues scale. It does something to you!
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In the immortal words of wise men everywhere...
"Dude, you need to get laid. Bad. "
Well well well, I see that you ARE indeed living in style, serenading some 'good baby girl'. ;)
But I gotta say, get John Mayer to belt out this one, and you have a winner. With the ladies, at least :)
@Pi
I concur! Whole heartedly even!
@angel
Na, this one was for no one in particular. Just "felt" like a blues ballad! Muddy Waters and B.B.King can be very persuasive.
I have a winner?! Gee thanks! *wide grin* Will call Mr.Mayer asap!
Birthday Blues.. huh? 3 posts in a row..
Nice one.. get Guugu to put music! U have ur first song :)
Akanksha
hey! belated happy birthday!
and yes,
happy number.
Always loved blues and jazz. Just listen to BB King.
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belated bday wishes!!! and LOL...nice one!!!
this might sound all girly and ewww.
but still i say
awwwwwwwwwwww
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Er.
i agree with the Mr. john mayer issue..... although i HAVE TO , HAVE TO, n HAVE TO, say this.....
this is good !!!!!! but (sorry for the critique) u could improve the 2nd n 3rd stanza.
Yeah dude, listen to AmazingArchie and improve the 2nd and 3rd stanza. I'm sure she knows what she's talking about.
[Evil Grin]
Aha, had just heard bout you.
Now believe it too!
Thanks to my Secret Child.
Improve the 2nd and 3rd stanza? In what way? I think he has said what he had to. How should he improve it?
the 2nd n 3rd stanza could have gone with the flow...(although im no keats or vettorio to comment).. sir it was my comment and i guess we can all exercise freedom of speech...
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